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#1 Stanic

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Posted 16 August 2010 - 01:39 PM

So, here you can publish your stories. :)

First one mine (entry for contest), more to come soon.

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„Is everything ready?“ asked General Dagfinnr.

„Yes, sir,“ quickly responded Yvo. „We shall launch attack in 60.“

After 50 seconds, countdown started. General Dagfinnr was smiling. Now all the people on the Mirasdir, planet that betrayed him, shall disappear.


ONE HOUR EARLIER


General Dagfinnr was heading towards office of Admiral Hemlowski. Few hours ago, general was patrolling over the planet stratosphere, when he noticed ship, launching an attack. He was fast enough, to stop them, with his ships canons. Now he was hoping for graduation and maybe better ship. Although, even this one was one of the best ships on planet. He knocked at the door and waited. He heard admiral voice, calling him to enter.

„What on Mirasdir were you thinking, general? Why would you attack that ship without asking for permission?“

„But, they were ...“

„No but. I will not suffer this here. I don't care, if they were about to blow the planet away. What if that would be our ship preforming some tests? I don't give a damn about it.“

„Sir, with all do respects ...“

„Stop calling me sir, I am not your boss anymore!“

„Does that mean …“

„Yes, this means you are fired,“ admiral kept yelling at general.

Without any word, general turned around, and left. He was mad at admiral, mad at army, mad at everyone. So mad, he wanted them dead. And in that rage, an idea popped in his mind. He most certainly hoped, not everyone knew about this.

He went to town and talked few young rebels, to go with him. He was heading towards his army spaceship. His ex army spaceship.

Guard, luckily for general, had no idea about general being dismissed, and he left them on plane.

In couple of minutes, they were up in the air. They were soon out of atmosphere. General pulled out his personal gun. He started to play with it.

„Launch attack on Mirasdir,“ he ordered. Surprisingly, there were no words against that.

„Yvo, that's your name, right?“ he asked one of the youngs.

„Yes, sir.“ he responded.

General passed him paper. „Here are the information on how to launch the attack. Do it now.“

Few minutes passed and general asked: „Is everything ready?“

„Yes, sir,“ quickly responded Yvo. „We shall launch attack in 60.“

After 50 seconds, countdown started. General Dagfinnr was smiling. Now all the people on the Mirasdir, planet that betrayed him, shall disappear.






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